Thanks for the input.
Ya I don't personally like finished edges so I don't finish them on bags I make for myself...which is all I do at this point.
I see what you mean about the front pocket size and I agree, now that I see it. good idea. Flaps on them? ya I guess.
Ya the stitching on that front middle piece got harry on me somehow. Not sure what happened. I don't think I back stitched , but not sure what happened. I should probably just redo it since it's a small area.
Yes the flap hangs weirdly to one side for some reason. Not sure why. Can you show me a pic of what you mean by horizontal keepers?
Overall thanks for the comments. I appreciate them. I might post my first bag to get some impressions on that one as well.