Members Stewart Posted July 27, 2018 Members Report Posted July 27, 2018 I am still working on this as can be seen. A lot can be changed from here. Mountains-change to sunset or keep it like it is or finish up on the rider. See what happens . Quote
Members Stewart Posted July 27, 2018 Author Members Report Posted July 27, 2018 Finished. Something is missing. It looks harsh and needs a common connector to smooth out the stand alone look. Quote
Contributing Member fredk Posted July 27, 2018 Contributing Member Report Posted July 27, 2018 You need something of interest in that patch of green meadow Divide your image into 9 spaces; two lines vertical at equal spacing and two across at equal spacing. This'll give you a grid to work on 'the rule of thirds' for image composition. Items of interest should lie on or about the intersection of the thirds. Also draw a triangle from the rider to the cabin to ??? and then back to the rider - you have no dynamic triangle as you do not have that third point of the triangle - something in that meadow will complete the triangle - somewhere about the third/fourth fence post from the right and just a bit below where the post goes into the ground Quote Al speling misteaks aer all mi own werk..
Members Stewart Posted July 27, 2018 Author Members Report Posted July 27, 2018 On 7/27/2018 at 5:41 PM, fredk said: You need something of interest in that patch of green meadow Divide your image into 9 spaces; two lines vertical at equal spacing and two across at equal spacing. This'll give you a grid to work on 'the rule of thirds' for image composition. Items of interest should lie on or about the intersection of the thirds. Also draw a triangle from the rider to the cabin to ??? and then back to the rider - you have no dynamic triangle as you do not have that third point of the triangle - something in that meadow will complete the triangle - somewhere about the third/fourth fence post from the right and just a bit below where the post goes into the ground Expand Thank you. That is some valuable advice to share. It centers a focal point showing the missing voids. Thank you very much. Quote
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