New Logo Just Finished Up

[jayjay]

This is the new logo for my business I think i'm going to have some t-shirts made. What do you think?

color logo.1.pdf

Edited July 2, 2013 by jayjay

[Wolfye]

I like it

[Tina]

Kind'a cool :-)

But as a logo is way to busy with way to many details. The image could never be reproduced for a logo stamp for example in a size that works for your leather goods. It needs to be simplified, think "less is more". This image could be very cool on a webpage though

[jayjay]

I agree this is for some t'sbirts and such but not as a markers mark.

[silverwingit]

Since you asked... With a logo, you want to tell a story or convey a feeling as simply as absolutely possible. Your example is confusing. What is the story you want to tell? What is the feeling you want to invoke in the observer? How do the elements of the logo relate to the name of your company? These are the questions you need to ask yourself when you design a logo. Moreover, you need to ask these questions from the perspective of a person who knows nothing about what you are trying to say. You must be your own harshest critic. With these thoughts in mind, take a hard look at your current version. Then remove anything that doesn't contribute to telling your story in as few "words" as possible.