Ferg:
Thanks. I'm eager to know what your daughter thinks. I'll be posting a revised version at the end of my message, so be sure to grab that one too!
Bruce:
Good idea about putting our names. I totally agree, gives it a more personal feel. About the phone number format, it's been around for a few years. I'm glad you gave me some insight about it though. Don't want people wondering what the heck it is, I want them to call! We'd rather not put our mailing address on there. Personal preference. If enough money starts coming in from this, then maybe we'll get a P.O. Box and put that on there.
Big Gun Doctor:
Good idea too about being a little more specific. At first, I didn't want to list anything so I wouldn't limit ourselves or have some people not call because what they want isn't listed. But I think I figured out a way of going around that problem.
Mike:
I agree. I just posted a revised version.
To everyone (whether you have replied or not):
I've taken in the comments received so far and came up with a revised version. Here it is. What do you think? Am I going in the right direction?