I’m new but here you go over all it looks ok some things you may want to consider for the next one.
The stitching looks good nice and even spacing, try and keep the awl going the direction of the stitch some of yours are turned 90 degrees and it makes the hole look oblong.
Change your image size when you upload the picture I think it turns folks off when it come up so large it also shows all your mistakes.
Try and use a camouflage tool with more texture that will give your carving more contrast, also try using a beveller on the detail instead of just using the modeling tool.
I guess its like every thing else practice practice.