It looks much better than my first attempt back in the day. Take a gander at some of the resources available for 'Sheridan' style to learn how to manipulate your tools to towards this style. the Sheridan Carving Book would be probably the best resource in print.
Keep at it, you will see improvements as you get going. Don't forget to keep photographs or mark your projects with attempt numbers and dates, so you can look back and see your improvements for encouragement.
Good luck